Reviews for Your Love Will Never Last |
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![]() ![]() ![]() it's true, how many times have we all been through that torture? you are one heck of a poet, my friend. xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is really deep.. I dont even know what to say.. but if its about you.. I'll just say that i feel for you and hang in there... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sad... teenage angst. Nice poem; very honest. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, VERY powerful, i love the last line... it's like so final and says it all really, great work and an EXCELLENT flow / rhythm x weasel within x |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this poem. It's ture on how most relationships are. I really do like this. I htink i shall read more.. lol... |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. really great work, it's full of feeling and (unlike some poems) seems to have a lot of meaning too. P. for reviewing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooh! i love it! this is going on my favourites because...i love it! its really really good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A perfect example of hypocrisy at its worst, when someone you let in looks after you, lifts you up, only to pull you down with their next sentence. All things must end, all good things come to pass. The rhymes add to the poem, making even more fantastic then it was to begin with. Miss-Fev |
![]() ![]() ![]() Meep, I gotta stop stalking people, but your work is just so good! I disagree with Agriel in Who is She, your rhymes aren't forced and I think they add structure to the poem. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good example of how abuse hurts more than one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good poem... i meant the cookie cutter thing cuz cookie cutter is a nickname for a cutter |
![]() ![]() ![]() A powerful statement, to be ristricted from living ones own life, or even enjoying it can stiffle the soul. You speak of a taboo subject that many people don't understand and you bring justice to it, in a way you give it a face and a name. Lovely work. Keep up the good work. Much love, Juliet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow.. very itnerestin.. I really love it.. it's so powerful.. tahnks so much for your reviews.. sorry about my lack of punctuation... Ill work on it.. lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey thanks for the review! I really like this poem. You got the rhyme thing goin real well. Is it possible that it not really about physical abuse? I see at as ...hm the abuse of love? but i really like how it makes sence at the end. it's very thoughtful, please post more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love your writing! i like this piece because of the truth behind it. the idea that one can both hurt and heal. that they do not always have to just destroy and walk away. great job! keep writing! |