Reviews for My Storm
corawellsome chapter 1 . 1/23/2006
Deep, and well-detailed, a powerful pice good work.
aquamoon222 chapter 1 . 2/26/2005
Four word to say about this: Brilliant! Amazing! Astounding! Beautiful! It was filled with so much hope, and pain and emotion. It tells a very deep and symbolic story. Wow! I am truely in awe! This is definately going in as one of my favorites!

thnxs 4 the reviews!:)
Deirdra Chaeli chapter 1 . 1/6/2005
O.O I like this one. The emotional pull is very strong, a plea to the people who are lost to try and find light. I like it a great deal. You are so talented!
u-will-never-know chapter 1 . 9/25/2004
This is great! The parts that rhyme are perfect and the words are well picked. I like the way you kept repeating the little stanza:
"I cannot save them
I cannot even save myself
But I can try" I think that really added to the effect of the poem. Well done! :D
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 9/25/2004
i like this! its a good poem by you as usual ;) keep on writing ;)