|Reviews for Destination|
| Liebchen Rose chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
Wow...this is fantastic! You're poetry is so vivid!LR
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 10/2/2004
Good draft, lots of great ideas, . . . m
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 10/1/2004
this is good, i like it :)
| bayshel-wass chapter 1 . 9/28/2004
Wow...very powerful. Only one suggestion: I think the word "stupid" could be changed, maybe to "dumb."
I really liked the phrase "within death's cold embrace we lie."