Reviews for cavities
Joewhatever chapter 1 . 2/15/2005
Nicely done. It was quite fabulous. It sounded heartfelt and real, and...tired. Wonderful poem, I enjoyed it.
Another Pseudonym chapter 1 . 10/14/2004
" i am your life support
i am your beep. beep. beep."
excellent.
this is britt chapter 1 . 9/29/2004
you've inspired me! I love this! I love this! I LOVE THIS! "bep. beep beep beep." You should be elevated to god status here. I want to put on favorites.
Midnight In Eden chapter 1 . 9/26/2004
I love not only the format but the last two lines. So true...
Keep writing
.:midnight:.