Reviews for Patience
Pont chapter 1 . 11/16/2004
That's so cool! I like it! Nice change in point of view near the end, and I love how you formatted the writing. Very descriptive.
pont
marean chapter 1 . 11/7/2004
i love it!
marean chapter 1 . 11/7/2004
i love it!
Earthsong12 chapter 1 . 9/27/2004
I like it! It;'s very well written. It's so sad, the "they laughed as I cried" bit. I like the formatting too, the indents show the feeling nicely.
One thing I didn't get, is in the end she just says "okay" and agrees with them. You' think there'd be some anger at them, for laughing at her. ah well. *shrug*
Okay, just me being stupid: Is the last line mtaphorical or is she really a tree? I can read it either way.
JoseJavi chapter 1 . 9/26/2004
Great poem. I'm adding it to my faves list. Perfect ending, I love this kind of poems because you don't really understand it until the end.
ByFireAndMoonlight chapter 1 . 9/26/2004
This is good, and if there were mistakes I didn't notice them, though thats probally because I'm not quite smart enought to. *shrugs* oh well. Good job!