Reviews for Puzzle of June the Fifth
candycorn22 chapter 2 . 1/15/2005
i definately think this could be expanded on, but for now it works. do you plan on adding to this chapter? anyway, nice work an' all, just keep it up!
candycorn22 chapter 1 . 1/15/2005
short, but good so far. was the use of 'my' in the first line intentional? 'cause if it is, who are you?
Bloodflower chapter 2 . 1/10/2005
Consider this a review for a review.

This is very good, I love your clipped style.

It's just your very first line has a first person 'my' in it, I don't know whether that's intentional - but the rest of it is in third person, so I'm kind of wondering about that. Other than that, thumbs up! Can't wait for more!
freakiidrooop chapter 2 . 1/5/2005
it's short but certainly got me hooked. keep writing! (not so good at writing reviews)
orangepen23 chapter 1 . 1/5/2005
very short. Interesting, but short. It would be interesting to know if your 'homocide report' follows the actually format of a real report.
Ahemait chapter 2 . 1/5/2005
haha i 'm in your profile! thank you friend! nice story...update or i shall murder you in your sleep! bwahahaha!
Amelia Grant chapter 1 . 12/20/2004
great writing, friend! it's interesting, and keeps the reader... reading!
Alex chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
c'est tres bien, mon ami!
R. Hollins chapter 2 . 9/29/2004
Get more chapters posted! I liked it :)
EvilNeko13 chapter 2 . 9/27/2004
I like the way this is written. Very short and simple sentences describing the case, yet paragraphs without any choppiness or interruptions. Good work!
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EvilNeko13
P.S. I thought a good title might be "June the Fifth, 2004" or maybe drop the 2004. I don't know. Just a suggestion. lol.
Crystal Clear Lies chapter 2 . 9/27/2004
Wow, this is good! I can't wait until the next chapter! Hmm...How about...'Pieces and Puzzles'? Sounds corny, yes. But I thought it would fit...You don't have to