Reviews for The Guardian Prince |
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![]() ![]() A really nice story with a great plot. However, I believe it would be even better if it was better structured in regards to details of the characters, setting and the minor details that will give the story better flow. |
![]() ![]() ![]() rly nice story. like it a lot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful read. :"D Loved the fluff, action was awesome, and they lived happily ever after. What's more to love? |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's very cute! I liked it! I loved when she was kidnapped by Ric. And the conversation with her parents the morning after! That was priceless! Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Someone said that there was something missing from this fic and I think I figured out what it is: development. You have a good plotline and good ideas but I think what you need more of is development of the characters, the actions that happen, and their relationships. I feel like a lot of the times, Ric's actions seemed so OCC but then I realized that he never really had an established personality to begin with. I see that he has a strong leadership quality... but then everything after that is just kind of free to be whatever. I think it's cute though. I read this story because I was intrigued by the plotline, and I still do like the plot. I'm glad that they have a happy ending and the Genie & Ric end up together without any real complications. However, I think that you could improve your story to be even greater if you took some time to develop the characters' personalities & the events that occur, going into more detail. I feel like everything was kind of glossed over. Cute story though (: It was a nice, light read :D - Alyssa |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw! I love happy endings! Good story! : ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() sweet ending! I loved it all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() o i really loved this story. it was unbelieveably imaginative and descriptive, i couldnt wait for more! awesome job EA |
![]() ![]() ![]() good job. everyone likes a "prince meets princess and falls in love and lives happily ever after" piece of fiction. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() to be honest, I think this story lacks something, maybe some creativity and originality, have I mentioned that it looks like you made a fanfic of the Princess Diaries? Hell, i don't think so, but yeah it looks that way, and Schenovia sounds like Genovia... any way nice story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awsome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw! that was really sweet! it's good that this is a happy ending_ keep up the good work_ |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw that's sweet, that's good that they got married...update soon!_ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh how cute! I assume this is the end of their romance good story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice addition to your story! SO thrilling!... So you're gonna end this soon right? after the marriagae or there's more to come? more to gerard than what he's showing? :)) |