Reviews for Just Imagine
PaulAsaran chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
Ah, been there, done that. This poem adequatly reflects what it's like; the emotion is well played.
sam the bear chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
The ending sounds sort of like you're rubbing it back in HER face. First 3 stanzas (is that what they're called? i'm not sure cause i'm not really big on poems) is really describing to the reader about how you were BEFORE the breakup. Sounded like you took the breakup well according to the poem. A bit of anger, a bit of revenge kind of feeling to the last two lines too. Good work!
DarkPharaoh1666 chapter 1 . 10/18/2004
nice, good write. you once reviewed me saying i needed more passion in my poems, well...please look at some of the new ones i have put up.
phantasy-hope chapter 1 . 9/27/2004
I loved it. I especially liked how each stanza started off with "Just imagine" and how the poem progressively leads to the break up. One criticism: I think the "may be" in the last line should be one word. That last line was powerful nonetheless. _