Reviews for Shaun a snowcapped romance
GarethNelson chapter 1 . 9/28/2004
wish i could say something to help but best way to get over it is to let it out and you're doing that through your poetry
hope you're alright
p.s talk to me on MSN sometime if you want
Eirien chapter 1 . 9/27/2004
A strong poem, it powerfully gets across the way the speaker is still haunted by "Shaun". You achieve this through all the sensual details, and the wonderful images you employ. It is hard to distance oneself from a person one has been close to, one's whole body seems to scream for the other's presence even if the mind tells us something else ... I especially love the last stanza, that is superb in its perfect imagery, so concise and to the point, and a powerful contrast to the rest of the poem.