Reviews for The Wedding Vows
pointythings chapter 1 . 9/29/2004
I like the last line, how it sort of contrasts with the happy feel of the first two. This is really nice.
Jo The Pirate chapter 1 . 9/28/2004
It's slightly altered from the standard 5-7-5, yet close enough to be considered a haiku. Lovely words, images flowing, beautiful. Keep your pen moving!
- Jo