|Reviews for Chemicals|
| blackrosestears chapter 1 . 9/28/2004
I really like how this piece flows together. It really is how a lot of people feel now. The only thing I didn't like was how you said that you were grieving but that you were gonna be alright. Like the way you said it just took away from the angst of the song. And it didn't really sound like a song. Just like an interlude. But that is still good. I really hope that you write more.