Reviews for Perfect Beauty
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 2/14/2005
in a golden heart with softest velvet,

lining her fair words for my tired hearing,

she fills up newborn day bright resplendent,

chanting sweetest incantations yellow,

tuned her lyre lilting soul's deepest wishes,

¿what of her corn silk braids that strike as rays?

¿what of her malachite eyes that steal souls?

¿what of her pomegranate lips blood drawn?

¿could her true beauty revealed instead not,

from her internal fulgor born regal?
acccountkiller chapter 1 . 10/3/2004
Hey! Nice one...he he...I decided to take yet another look at your poetry, lol, and I like this! sweet imagery! Btw, I wrote that essay, I'm from Serbia, lol. Love, Mia
Sang Yu Nung chapter 2 . 10/3/2004
Oh, I *LOVE* Spanish, lol. I can't read it as well in Spanish, but I liked it. Lovely description, it was so cute. . *write on* (thanks for the reviews, sorry it takes so long to get back to you!)
u-will-never-know chapter 1 . 10/2/2004
Thats really good i really like the descriptions and similies :D well done and thanks for the reviews
xxsimplicity chapter 1 . 9/30/2004
Nice poem!
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 9/29/2004
ah finally i can review! cool! nice writings ;)