|Reviews for End All My Pain|
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 1/22/2005
| Manuel Fajar chapter 2 . 1/22/2005
No lo digas mas,
El dolor viene y se va,—
Cuando abre flor.
| u-will-never-know chapter 1 . 10/2/2004
Aw thats so sad :(. Very relatable, you've captured exactly what it feels like though. Well done :D
| lifescrewsusall chapter 1 . 9/29/2004
Powerful... I'd like to read it in spanish, might you post the spanish version? It's very well written! Well I hope if this is something you're actually going through, you'll get through it. peace&love
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 9/29/2004
wow, very relatable... nice job! deep.
| Raya Dronaile chapter 1 . 9/28/2004
OMG, I was experiencing the EXACT SAME THING last year. OMG, what an awesome poem, I LOVE IT! You wrote the right things at the right time. Wonderful and brilliantly well written, and emotional poem. Outstanding job, seriously keep up the amazing work!