Reviews for Naive Slumber
Dirty Wallpaper chapter 1 . 9/30/2004
Very sad indeed. It was quite descriptive and i could picture the scene in my head quite clearly. Though it was good as an essay, i think it would be much more effective, you yourself could be much more expressive and free, if you wrote it as a short story maybe. Just a small suggestion :).
But ja, good work - if it's true, then i have one thing to say to you: boys will be boys. lol. Ah, i'm such the classic cliche. Kudos!