that was amazing...u are truly gifted...and kudos for covering a hard topic

That story was great. i love how everything happened ona Monday..kinda reminds me of my life..only everything happens on a Thursday~!~

Furk.

I seem to loose my ability to speak well when it comes to amazing writers.

Well, furk. Your stories make me all wound up inside because I think, maybe thats me, maybe thats me, but I have not grown enough into my identity to know myself totally and so I think, maybe thats not, maybe thats not.

I hate Mondays -definately going on my favorites list

Whoa...
You've just brought haiting mondays to a whole new level...
Really though, I thought this was excellent. It was so incredibly sad...and...wow, I really can't think of much else than that it was so well written too...I love the way you started at the beginning and went all the way to the end without losing the whole...monday theme. Argh, geez, just...great story. Keep on writing...