Reviews for The Hopeless Romantic Trilogy Part III: Poem
Jorgina chapter 1 . 2/12/2006
I like it a lot. You are a great poet; write more.
Renzie chapter 1 . 9/30/2005
Nice. This flows really well :D Great job! You're quite good at writing these! My favorite out of the trilogy was the first part, but the other two were also great. Wonderful job! 3
HgBookworm chapter 1 . 2/6/2005
Great poem. There's really some feeling in this poem. You can feel the rejection and disbelief radiating off of your work. -HgBookworm
rukki chapter 1 . 11/9/2004
oh. i am guessing it didn't go too well. your trilogy sounds autobiographical. There is a right time for everything. Don't lose faith in love or romance, it might come unexpectedly. Your poem actually rhymes. I haven't been reading poems that do rhyme. I love the parts where you say "A ticket in her hand,/ A ring on her finger." Everything seems to be up to her to decide where she wants to go in the relationship. Also "It all started with/'what's your favorite song?'" It hits home more because it is realistic. People do start conversations with that. I really enjoyed reading your trilogy.