Reviews for Forbidden
starflames chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
nice. an interesting train of thought.
Keith Andrew chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
very interesting train of thoughts here, a logical progression that goes beyond logic at he same time, portraying the stage between realtiy and dream when the body seems to fall through a void. Nicely done-Keith Andrew
BlackLilyArcher chapter 1 . 11/9/2004
i luv this one!
izzy chapter 1 . 10/20/2004
nice...kinda weird though...
Cloud Burst chapter 1 . 10/1/2004
short but sweet )