Reviews for Your Moans So Low
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 5/21/2005
very nice poem, I truly enjoyed this. the imagery is fantastic and the vocabulary really adds to the zest. :P very nicely done and really, beautiful. well done and keep it up!

!~* noelle *~!
UnsungbutWritten chapter 1 . 10/9/2004
It's so strange. Kind of circly, the words kind of rolled in my head for a moment. Almost heady, and drunk sounding. But it is quite magnetic...
Beth Morgan chapter 1 . 10/5/2004
I like it! I get it! I am so dumb! ;; Yay! It's soo good Jo! Inspiring even... hmm...
AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 10/3/2004
I'm impressed, very impressed with the way you portrayed this. The vocabulary to back up the imagery is very well done. This one's going on my favorites. )
Jenna xoxo
Out-Of-Reality chapter 1 . 10/2/2004
That was beautiful...Defenitely have a way with words you do!
genny marie chapter 1 . 10/2/2004
I like this very much... the brackets add a lot i think...
very nice
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 10/2/2004
Dear Pirate—unique this song you sing, . . . ~m~