Reviews for Shopping
hayella chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
good enough :) I love shopping myself.
munkeecrazed chapter 1 . 3/11/2005
great...loved it!wow...so true about us girls...lol. great job...but the milk anf fabric line..um...haha.
MaHaLLz chapter 1 . 11/14/2004
that's cool! it makes me think, geez, women are so picky. and, i was just reading a joke someone sent me in e-mail. so cool!
vturnip chapter 1 . 11/11/2004
That was really accurate and funny. Ah so true so true.
grim-dreamer chapter 1 . 10/4/2004
Hmm, choppy rhythm, but the ABAB rhyme scheme reflected the hectic thought processes of a fmale shopaholic? A suggestion: Rhyming couplets for the Male Version because it emphasises how easy it is for men to choose in comparison to women?
Lisa Parry chapter 1 . 10/4/2004
Quite a funny poem, if not predictable but still enjoyable. I like the way this has been done as in an almost panic!
Now, as for the a,b,a,b rhyme scheme it works, but loses its structure around from ,"Taking the fabric...without milk". Well, I think the lines flow more difficultly from there.