Reviews for Helping Me
MaHaLLz chapter 1 . 11/14/2004
nice. i can really feel this. keep writing!
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 10/9/2004
thats pretty cool too
MovingLife chapter 1 . 10/5/2004
Nice poem. Personally I'd prefer it if the last line was "Can you help this girl? For the beauty's lost on me." Keep 'em coming!
Ashes of a Willow chapter 1 . 10/4/2004
I liked the questions and the imagery was great. I also liked the rhymes here! keep up the great work
Deep Shadows chapter 1 . 10/4/2004
I loved this.
You are very detailed in your work.
Hope to read more of your stuff.
Deep Shadows