|Reviews for Passageway|
| logical-unreason chapter 1 . 10/5/2004
It took me 5 tries to review this and read it, I think fictionpress is playing up. Probably why your great new pieces have no reviews at all.
It feels a bit punkish, cool new style is always a new avenue of inspiration. the ryhmes are very fast and frantic pretty kick ass, though you could sing it slowly. Wtf am I doing anyway I'm just commenting on how it sounds. Right the focus and run of it is good, it doesn't die down anywhere and keeps going. Bile filled rant against someone almost.
Look forward to hearing this if it's ever played live.