This is a well written poem. You make the words come alive.

Good poem.

I did catch some misspelled words, which need to be spelled correctly this way: "hidding" is "hiding", "Emrald" is "Emerald", "entvine" I think needs a hyphen or needs to be two separate words, "Unkown" is "Unknown". Everything else is fine.

I like how you described these Spirits of the wood. I can almost get a picture in my head. Also, I didn't know that you can have titles look like that for poems and stories on this site, and possibly on the sister site as well? If you could, could you send me a PM to let me know how this happened? I would be interested in putting up interesting title fonts to my works as well.

In all, this was a good poem.

Columbine323

Wow, that is amazing. You're amazing!

this was good, but it seemed a little...childish at times. don't misunderstand me, i loved your descriptions and especially the verse before last, but i felt that the third and second verses got a little unoriginal. i think it may be because of the way you set it out, the short lines? hope this makes some sense and is vaguely helpful, or at least interesting!

Beautiful. Couldn't have said it better myself.

I liked these kinds of poems...simple lanuguage and slightly dissonant but still well written. Nice work.

Well, can't say I know much about poetry, but I liked it. In particular, the personification device.

It was good, but it needed more ears.

I am impressed. It was well written, and everything seemed to flow very nicely.
Congrats on a job well done!
Ghastly

I liked it. It liked the repitition of "spirits of the wood" and then the surprise change at the end. It relates fanciful creatures to our real world and makes one think differently about trees.

This is a very good poem. I know its short, but i aint got much more to say . Please r/r me.
_angel

I can almost see them...

A few spelling errors, but all around very good.

Great rhythm, and beautiful choice of words.

Wow, that was a really cute poem. I like this poem very much. Keep writing!

*Gaps, her jaw hanging open. She quickly closes it and blinks*

Er...you know, I'm not all that great with reviewing poetry, but this was great! I loved the descriptions you used in this, the comparing the emotions you have in this. I really liked this stanza:

Kind-hearted and gentle

Spirits of the Wood

Weeping, wailing

with the rain

Blessing, sheltering

all they know.

I thought that was very nicely done, as well as the rest, but to me, that one just stuck out. I really loved this. A lot of people think for in order for a poem to be good, it has to rhyme. That is very not true. There are many people with poetry that don't rhyme that are truely great, and yours is one of them.

This was really a very well written piece of writing. You really have talent for poetry.