Reviews for Let Me
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
Your kiss lingers on,

Ripped remnant-shredded old rag,

Won't stitch in life's quilt. -m-
Eirien chapter 1 . 11/6/2004
Wonderful piece, I like the intensity of emotion dripping from every line. Especially the two lines with the tears and the blood are very convincing and frame the poem in an effective way. Perfectly expresses the way one feels after some break-ups - at least I have felt the same way.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 10/8/2004
sorry its been awhile. u know ficpress and all. amazing poem! cant wait to read the other 2!
kerbieflaw chapter 1 . 10/5/2004
you managed to reach towards the reader and make them feel the poem. :D good job.
"if only the memories of you could seep out of me with this blood"
this was a strong line... yep. keep it up!