Reviews for Gentle Mother
oxytocin chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
Cute. I could imagine this as a prayer or a wiccan hymn in a wiccan school. aah. that would be the day. when wicca is accepted as a religion and is even on the curriculum in schools! awesome.
keltica chapter 1 . 12/16/2004
I discover much that we have in common, may she be blessed and may she heal from her reelings state because of humanity's folly ...

keltica, the celtic fire from within
tari-morielen chapter 1 . 11/25/2004
I have always found Wiccan prayers and the like to far surpass the beauty of the traditional Christian prayers, and you have only further cemented my views with this. The rhyming scheme is elegant and yet has a childlike air to it - in a playful and joyous sense, not by any means immature. Blessed be also to thee.
Ashes of a Willow chapter 1 . 10/5/2004
I liked how you started and ended with gentle mother and blessed be. very nice descriptions too! keep up the great work