|Reviews for The God of All Things|
| aaidenkae chapter 3 . 12/18/2005
i liked this one too!
| aaidenkae chapter 2 . 12/18/2005
i didnt like this one as much as the first. the repetition of the word fall in the first two lines sort of took away from the beauty of the poem but overall it was good. i liked it. thank you.-kae
| aaidenkae chapter 1 . 12/16/2005
this was really nice. i LOVED it and im not one who really likes haikus. this was great thank you!-kae
| ACCOUNT NO LONGER ACTIVE 1 chapter 2 . 1/20/2005
You should continue! They're both nice, short and sweet but I personally like 'Blue River' better, it's beautiful.
| Summerdazed chapter 1 . 1/16/2005
ah..a favourite. u seldom find haikus about nature that is so lovely. :O)
| Galadh Niniel chapter 2 . 1/15/2005
Beautiful, I like the pun in "teared", and the idea of rain as God's tears. Please continue this collection, I really like it.
| Leo Eigenmann chapter 1 . 12/21/2004
Come on, You've got to continue this!
| Eirien chapter 1 . 10/12/2004
Beautiful, you express the wonder of the creation process in a very creative, unique way yourself. Nice little piece.
| Anjeni Windsinger chapter 1 . 10/5/2004
I love this. For some reason, it made me smile at the end. I'm not too good with reviewing haiku, so I hope you can forgive me for this horrible one.
| Ashes of a Willow chapter 1 . 10/5/2004
i like the comparison of God drawing a river in our world. keep up the great work