Reviews for Cognitive Inertia
Sasi chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
"I wish she would stop tantalizing me with

smiles" I love this.. the kind of expression you put in your words is amazing! Good Work ..
dancingintherain chapter 1 . 2/21/2006
hehe why do i always find most of your poems a little humurous? you're just too good at this D lol you must write more!
Selphie T. Kinneas chapter 1 . 5/28/2005
Exellent poem I have to say! Great vocab. I know it's rude to empathize but i know EXACTLY how you feel.

Anyways, another great work. Seeya soon!
Infection chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
beautifully written. great descriptive language. infection
Satya Kokala chapter 1 . 1/17/2005
I appreciate the romantic thought "to tantalize with smiles and similar kindness" very much. Good job.
ossining chapter 1 . 1/7/2005
Interesting poem. I like the line about fading off like a sand dune.
Sat Hari chapter 1 . 12/13/2004
I like your depth and wisdom
a duel of pens 111 chapter 1 . 11/22/2004
reminds my of my concience muse. it kicks me every once and a while.
Nanners chapter 1 . 11/5/2004
Ooh...I like this...big words are fun. I love words...don't you?
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Although I myself really do not see what that has to do with the actual poem. I love the poem, too _
That One Weird Guy chapter 1 . 11/2/2004
your vocabulary leaves nothing to be disired, nothing makes a submission better then a well rounded vocabulary, and I can see yours is quite above par.
Musical Missonary chapter 1 . 10/11/2004
Good. I like it. The fantastic tourture of the imagination that knows what it likes.
Ashes of a Willow chapter 1 . 10/10/2004
I like the imagery of a sand dune! Keep up the great work and welcome to