Reviews for Never
Freeha chapter 1 . 10/5/2004
Rough. The wording is...rough. You ought to smooth it out. It's like walking down the sidewalk in bare feet, and you step on a rock. Don't leave it there, pick it up and move it out of the way. I've got to say that you have a lot of rocks in this poem. Smooth it out, and it'll be a master piece.
Celestial Child