Reviews for Stop The Spinning
myno chapter 1 . 10/15/2004
there's a whole world out there
and I'm missing it...
i love those two lines. again, beautifully written poem.
kerbieflaw chapter 1 . 10/10/2004
somehow, i felt the poem... all that spinning and twirling... rather well done, although not your best, but the emotion was good. ;) keep writing.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 10/8/2004
spinning! my brains spining! hehe! yeah... cool peom!
confused being99 chapter 1 . 10/6/2004
I like it, its like..falling out of love...and put in a quiet way sorta. very good. keep writing
~*~confused being99~*~