I was reading this story and just noticed that you haven't updated in about 3 or more years. Are you not going to ever finish this story? I wish that you would please update, but i don't think that will happen. Thanks.

Aww. I read another one of your stories,(and absolutely love it!) and it also seems to have been abandoned like the last. Heh, the AN for this chappy is a total lie I see. :P I love your dialogue, its just brilliant, fast and witty, with some interesting characters and what looks like the beginning of and interesting story. I just hope you see this and maybe get back into writing, or putting your writing up on FP again. Sigh... :( Come back...pretty please? Your stuff is really good, and I'd love to read more of it, your sense of humour really makes me laugh. :)

okay, I have to be honest. when i first saw this story on Awaking Kills the Dream's profile, I didn't think it was going to be that great. But I read it anyway. and I LOVED IT! it was amazing. (the shift buttin and I aren't getting along right now, btw) so yeah. great story! (i wonder if that'll work?)

I love it it breaks the cliché that people normally use for vampire story’s please write agine soon.

Update, please. I've been looking forward to seeing what happens with Andarian and Mirielle since you stopped! I really want to see what happens with them, what happened to him upon his return, and what it's like in her new job. It's a very intriguing story, and it's sad it stops here.

Very good story.

Your friend Awaking Kills the Dream introduced

me to it.

I have to say this is very interesting and well written! Keep it up!

So... are you ever going to update this?

This story is great, genuinely interesting and a pleasure to read. I hope you continue it when are we going to see Andy again! _

I love it. plz update soon.

Well, what can I say? As always, I love it! ;)

But I do wish that those people telling you that you've made some spelling and punctuation errors could tell you exactly what, seeing as both you and I have over-looked them...XP It's not like I'll mysteriously overnight is going to see the mistakes I obviously over-looked the day before :P

~Awaking kills the Dream

cool. . . intriguing! i want more! hurry and update! oh and just a lil pointer try to make the chapters longer. the thought and character process gets cut off when you have to switch into a new chapter, it kid of makes a border type thing. as you can imagine this isnt good lol, my advice is to try combining two chapters together, i know it gives you less chapters but it make the story easier and more interesting to follow, great work though! you have talent! ;D

good story! please do continue. i dont know what i would do if i had a bunch of vampires after me. well, actually i guess id ask them if i could be one of them.

ha, that would suck major being killed by a vamp. i like your story. its cool how it's in first person.

Good physical descriptions - you have a knack for those, don't you - this chapter is less polished than the others, but it's newer. Tension is moutning - she's trying to rescue someone she doesn't even know is in trouble - but I can sympathize with her decision. She can't help it, it's who she is.