Reviews for Day Dream
Mistress-Nightmare chapter 1 . 5/25/2005
What i like about this poem is that if you look at the shape of the poem, it looks like the beginning of stairs. Stairs that lead off to your day dreaming. Then the stairs stop and decline...and thats where you snap back to reality. I dont know, but i see art in this poem (not saying that every poem isnt art). But you know what i mean :)
scudcrow chapter 1 . 10/6/2004
Awesome! I had a dejavu while reading this one. Reminds me of the time I got goosebumps after dosing off during a boring lecture, and I was brought back to life by this girl who blew air at my ear to wake me up.