Reviews for Killing the Cliche' |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I've just read all seven chapters that was great! I love the dialogue between kyle and Amy. the sexual tension! i can't wait to read more more soon please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story. Seems a bit cliche'd, but I'm trusting the title. Writing style is okay... It could probably be a little better with a thesaurus. Off the type of my head I don't know any good ones. Maybe try a search engine. In the whole: I like it. If I didn't, I wouldn't waste my time reading it and reviewing. I'd like to read more. By the way, I saw this same story by Firefly1987. Any connection here? That's it for now. Looking forward to the next chapter. much love vintage fade |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story. Kyle is very interesting and well he's just hot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww! What a cute story! I'm really starting to like Kyle, and what Amy does to annoy him is soo cute! And that scene in chapter 5, I mean, when he kisses her neck? That was so hilarious! LOL! But seriously, if I were in Amy's shoes, I'd fall over, struck by love! Kyle sounds so hot! _ GOd, I swear, I was laughing all the while reading this! Please continue! And ooh, horrible cliffy! I'll keep reveiwing if you keep the story rolling! _~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like... pls write more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gah... leaving it there... I'm so happy that I found this story -I had desperately been in need of reading a good fic. Lately it's been nothing nothing but swings and misses. Anyways, awesome. I love it so much when the guy and girl hate each other initially, and you write it perfectly. This definitely gets to join my favorite stories list. :) Oh, and update as soon as possible, I beg of you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW! This story absolutely ROX! I was totally engrossed. I love the whole verbal insult thing! I'm totally psyched up now...anywayz, UPDATE SOON~~ I'll be waiting very very eargerly! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooh good story..keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is cute! i like it! hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol, this is so funny, yet Kyle's so freakin' scary! He's gonna soften oh yeah, lol, and they're gonna be in love lol. Love the story! Keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehe, I like it! Keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG!AWESOME! And Sexy. I love a hot romance. Okay okay so im a romantic wierdo. I haven't put any stories on becuz i haven't found one that is deserving of my time and energy but it'll happen. U really should finish this. I hate it when an author starts a story but doesn't finish it and it's a great story. C YA! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahm... don't you think that if you were kidnapped, you'd at least question your assailants as to their intentions? This 'Amy' hasn't. At all. She got scooped up from the sidewalk and taken to a distant apparently otherwise abandoned house, and is being forcibly kept there under lock and key, but she has done nothing but accept it. |