Reviews for Underneath
PhuBarr chapter 1 . 11/14/2004
Hey CB! Well since I haven't been on in a while and I haven't reviewed one of yours, I'm going at it. :D. This is exactly how I feel when I see a girl that I wouldn't mind dating. Nice Poem, Well Wrote.
nick-wordsmith chapter 1 . 10/7/2004
Not bad at all. My favourite lines are "But the fear of rejection, leaves me outnumbered."
Stones decay, words last
Nick
PS: Maybe check out my poem 'The Craven'