|Reviews for Tear|
| myno chapter 1 . 10/15/2004
very interesting poem. The capitalized MY MIND and TO THE OTHER SIDE caught my attention immediately, because it's not something i've ever done in a poem, and it usually bothers me in other peoples poetry, but it didn't bug me for whatever reason. I like your general format and style. If you have time, i'd appreciate you reviewing something of mine.