Reviews for Taste of Jealousy
CognitoErgo chapter 1 . 2/27/2005
I like your style, the sort of fragmented, broken off thoughts that make the whole thing that much stronger in impact.

My favourite parts are the last couple lines, and the "taste of sour / and the taste of jealousy," cuz they're that thing that I can't remember the term for right now, where you give intangeble things tangible qualities. Maybe I'm confusing it with something else. _;; But I like it nonetheless