|Reviews for My sister, she paints|
| like a lover chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
oh my god, most amazing poem i've read in a long time. just simply amazing. just. oh. wow. i adore it.
| moonarised polane chapter 1 . 10/24/2004
the last line was realy gd.
"A-ducation". it really fits the whole education system here.
you're certainly talented and i like the way you write angst without simply telling readers "i'm angry. so there.".
ps thanks for your review. and yeah i do agree that i need more work for that one. it certainly is not one of my favourites. and yep. full of cliches. oh and i realised that i am quite biased against pop. but anyway, i have changed my bio because i was bored with the old one. yup.
| Honey Nut Loop and m-j chapter 1 . 10/15/2004
Fantastic last stanza. Really effective manipulation of language. Be glad by the way. This is the fourth time i've tried to review this but my computer was being a bugger.
Oh and by the way, if you aver feel like reading my work...
| glitterjewele chapter 1 . 10/8/2004
ah, very good. i like the way you bring a real situation to life, and then tie it into the moral at the end ~ it makes the message that much more powerful. great work! :D