Ok, you have cliff hangers too! Ah, update this, you got me wanting to know what happens. I have a general idea but then again I'm not sure...just update!

Wow. Nice ending. Definately keeps the reader interested until the next chapter. I noticed several spelling and grammatical errors throughout the story, btw. I still liked this though, especially the last paragraph. I know it was the b/f who walked in, and I can only imagine what it felt like seeing his g/f kiss his best friend. And what kind of best-friend is that anyway? But yeah, you have a nice little story here that has potential. Update soon!

This is damn good! I assume there will be a second chapter though, to fit with the summary. I saw it coming, but it suprised me anyway -. nice work.
djsaxon2
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