Reviews for twixt the dawn and the day
Anonymouse chapter 1 . 10/13/2004
I could offer some long-winded analysis of your form and use of modern technique (as I am often wont to do) or I could say this:
Your poem is beautiful.
I'm not sure that I completely understood it-all poems seem to have a shaded little corner where deeper thoughts lie-but I appreciated every line I read.
Cloud Burst chapter 1 . 10/9/2004
luv ur prose in this, and great poem!