Interesting.

In more ways than one.

Go on.

If only everything could really be cleaned
Until it became just like before
Untouched
Unstained
Unbroken.
if only... I love this, it's going onto my favs. How I wish broken friendships could really be cleaned, until they became untouched, unstained, unbroken... I just lost my best friend I think, and i don't know how to get him back. Your poem was a comfort to me. I really like your format and style. my fav story, fav authors list just got another entry each. :)

It's so beautiful, Xi. Small drops of dew, tears of morning glory. I wonder if Yona knows...

loved this poem. the last part was esecially sad. but i thought it summed up really nicely. great work.
adding this to my favvs

Absolutely stunning. Works on the heart and the soul. Incongrous how our reactions can be when life shatters around us. -m-

beautifully written and so true.. definately one of your best.. tahnks so much for your reviews... if you could could you read the part in my info called revers participation necessary and help me with that?

what could have happened to inspire tears from all but her?
the cleaning lady brings her-and us-back to reality very effectively...while the wilted flowers pull us into illusion. embracing sorrow...
the last line and the last stanza are particularly poignant.
keep it up ne...

Your last line is so poignant! *sniff* It was worth logging in just to review this. _ Keep it up kerbie!

hmm... rhythm, but no rhyme, interesting poem, It's hard to believe you can write when someone asks you to, I can only write when I get the right inspiration.
Nice.