|Reviews for Behind the cloudy veil|
| Odyssey2469 chapter 3 . 4/25/2012
Powerful and strong… Well Written Odyssey2469
| Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
Tränen aus Stein sind eine unglaubliche Metapher. Darauf wäre ich nie gekommen!
| Rose Dark Thorn chapter 1 . 12/21/2004
The only way to regain the sun's warmth is to make the clouds dissipate, as clouds absorb the heat and don't let it through. Welcaome the heat and the joy of sunlight. :) Very nice write.
| marshbar960 chapter 1 . 12/11/2004
beautiful imageries! i can very well relate to this one, especially how you imply that the sun, meaning pride, shines conceals your empty feelings of sadness. very wonderfully done! thanks for sharing and keep writing!
p.s. it may be raining now but the illumious rainbow is yet to shine!
| Simple Enigma chapter 1 . 12/3/2004
M, good poem! you have alot of good visuals and some awsome personification. I read some of your others and ive noticed that you have a lovely way of creating an image and attaching it to a feeling. great job, from one LOTR lover who speaks elvish to another. lol, keep it up.
| Getuie chapter 1 . 11/16/2004
Beautiful imagery... again something that's easy to relate to... a common longing... Using the sun's rays to express this was masterful.
| catseyeview chapter 1 . 11/15/2004
I even like your angst poetry...its despair but despair that reads as prayer. Beautiful again.
| Ivriniel chapter 1 . 10/25/2004
I just can repeat myself: beautiful images!
| Anastasia Who chapter 1 . 10/17/2004
Very good poem. I love the symbolism. Beautifully written.