Reviews for Blackmail Love |
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VisualKeiRocker92761 chapter 12 . 8/21/2014 I really enjoyed reading this story and I loved how the plot and characters developed so smoothly over the chapters. Truly a wonderful piece of work! |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/19/2014 Wow this is an amazing story. Chapter 1 says it all. Can't wait to read the next chapter.. Thank you for sharing this story my dear Author... You did a great job. Keep it up. |
Yuki Saga chapter 12 . 11/17/2013 This ending really made me happy :) happy ending |
Yuki Saga chapter 11 . 11/17/2013 Oh my God, I'm crying..It was so sad! :(( |
dmnlt44 chapter 12 . 7/1/2013 Yay! Happy endings are the greatest, I'm glad you know that! |
FleetingMemories chapter 12 . 7/26/2012 Ah, I feel for Allan here. The two would have the cutest wedding of the century, if they ever held one. Cutest. Fantastic story! |
too much booty in the pants chapter 12 . 3/24/2012 I read this story all the time but I've never reviewed! *gasp* It's an awesome story, really well written I like that the feelings the Lincoln has for Allan gradually build up. Even then he was fighting them. It is absolutely horrid when characters in these types of situation fall in "love" by the second chapter. Like WTF this man is blackmailing you and fifteen minutes you love them. pshhha. Anywho, really well written, love it! |
Starryeyeddaydreamer9 chapter 1 . 1/26/2012 At first I thought reading this story I thought lincon spoke a little strange and I thought 'us Brits we don't talk like that ' then I said the words to me self and realised I sounds the exact same lol ! Kinda shocked ! Hope these characters find happiness ..,going to continue reading ! |
0nyx-Rose chapter 9 . 12/14/2011 I'm sorry, but this story is killing me. It's good that your story makes me feel emotions, but I feel no love for the characters. It just seems that Allan is hurting Lincoln over and over so he won't get hurt by him leaving, then Lincoln comes back to him! Even at the end of this chapter when Allan has hurt him, humiliated him and been a downright asshole to him, he still gives him a chance. I just don't see how Lincoln will still be in love with him, I realize this is a story but it's over-the-top unrealistic. Even from the start Lincoln seems to be practically forgiving him for raping him, which it is half the time. I'm going to finish the story but at this point I'm just getting a little too angry with the characters and completely frustrated. Sorry, I needed to have that little rant. |
pinnedheart chapter 12 . 9/30/2011 I really love this story... First it makes me feel angry then sad and I feel happy... I like this a lot! |
CinderellaWithCombatBoots chapter 3 . 8/27/2011 Hi. I was reading a story on AFF today and I was shocked when I began reading a love scene word for word that was written in this chapter wherein the smell of another is a central theme to the characters having sex. I'm not sure of the situation concerning it but it's called Pack Dynamics by project_amy and I just thought I'd drop by and inform you. It's on , again. It's just that your story has been one of my all-time favourites and that scene encaptured me the first time I read it and so I was really confused when I read the scene in the other story because it's actually been one I've been following for a while and it's the final scene in the story. |
NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 12 . 8/22/2011 so...interesting? i think Allan hurt Lincoln too much to have a healthy relationship with him, but oh well. Also, i feel that Lincoln's allusions to rape should've been explained. On the whole, this was filled to the brim with drama and did a good job with keeping up a very fast pace. good job! thanks for sharing! |
NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 3 . 8/22/2011 what a puncher of a last line! "and all i have to do is sell my soul?" great job! |
carrots chapter 7 . 1/27/2011 I really like it but um "Allan stuck without thinking," i think you meant "struck" and "I told you to say away from Lincoln" here you also probably meant "stay." Other that that love it :) |
SootyKiwi chapter 1 . 1/14/2011 What did Allan blackmail Lincoln with? |