Gah! Allan is a complete IDIOT! And it was going so well too!

Omg... . That was a rough chapter! -sniffles- BAD ALLAN! -stabs him with pitchfork- BAD! Poor Linc. On so many levels! That boy had it rough this chapter! Really good chapter, specially towards the end! GREAT JOB!

Ah, that was a great chapter, XD, as for constuctive critisim, I don't have anything, maybe next time -_-v any ways update ASAP

Much Love Mars D'mo

Other than the fact that the ending was the corniest thing - ever, I sort of liked this chapter.

Gogo boys. Heh. I want one for my birthday.

Nice and waffy~~ just what i need before a crapload of hw...

I loved it so much. Poor Linc! . That reminds me though, I want my Benny and Val story! Cause I kinda feel bad for Val, after the ending of Finding Heaven and all. . -shakes fist-

Anyways, Poor Linc. I feel so bad for him. And it just keeps getting worse! Anyways, great chapter and update soon!

I hope Linc sees Allan pleasuring and making someone else scream and see how fulfilled Allan seems, I mean who would want to screw a bloddy corpse? Just a little jealousy whddayathink?

So good as usual :) You never let me down! update soon pwease!

i hate it when things just revert to their old stage... UPDATE

So. Freaking. Good. *heart* I'm sorry, but I have no other words. Your talent is awe inspiring.

Damn, more overbearing brute! That chapter ended far too quick in my opinion! Awesome chapter! Update again soon!

woot! ah it wouldve been funny to have read that linc went into one of those cages! XD lol anyway, cant wait until the next chapter! its getting so good! damn and i still wanna know what that secret is...

yay! u updated! and yes~ more cuddly moments with linc and allan~ Hope u update soon!~

awesomeness major!

yay! lol fun times ahead i see lol i liked all the cuddly scenes with Allan and Lincoln. Even the ones where they were drunk lol fun fun stuff