Reviews for Blackmail Love
d'Neronique chapter 7 . 2/28/2005
I feel Destin's pain. College paperwork sucks.

And yes, I am your hero. The gogo boy part made me happy, and for that, I'll ask you to marry me - again.

And just so you know, I accidentally wrote 'gogo boy park' in the part above before I fixed. I really want there to be a gogo boy park. Like GayDay Disney, only hotter.

Anyway, great, long chapter. It rides like 10-inches.
Esquirella chapter 7 . 2/28/2005
It was cool to see the cruise from Allan and Lincoln's POV. But I'm sad that Allan's going to be a beast again. *Sigh* But I guess he must if he's to eventually learn his lesson, right?
Ladako chapter 7 . 2/28/2005
Donovan should die! I remember that feeling and it hasn't gone away! Okay I loved this chap! I hope things begin to work out for Allen and Linc and Allen should get checked. He should cool it with that whole "I'm an alpha male!" He should try sweeter things on Linc. Be nice! C ya!
Sheepie chapter 6 . 2/4/2005
Squee, another great chapter. I can't wait for an update! Better be soon or Imma have to whip out the pitchfork! Lol. .

Poor Linc, but now I feel kinda bad for Val. You really have to write his story once your done with this one . like that way we can get things from his side of view and see what he goes through . And so he can get with that cutie at the end of Finding Heaven!

r.mai chapter 6 . 1/25/2005
e! allan and lincoln. P ah... lincoln's being so hostle. XD (it's kinda natural but don't ya think he's been a little more sweet lately? plus you know you love him. x)
Ree chapter 6 . 1/23/2005
I haven't read Finding Heaven yet (shame on me, I know), so I feel a little out of the loop, but.. God do I love this story! You are an AMAZING writer, and I admire your characters, development, and suspense. I love love love Linc and Allan. *melts* And you just write them so well.. man, I must be REALLY missing out if I haven't read Finding Heaven yet. I'll do that next, then. *grins* Update as soon as possible, okay? I'll be waiting.
Cookie Gestapo chapter 6 . 1/22/2005
::Waits imaptiently for updates:: .
KillingProphet chapter 6 . 1/21/2005
You are of course bloody brilliant. -kisses your cheek-
Namishka chapter 6 . 1/20/2005
sure it made sense...rereading it schol right now..
Chardae chapter 6 . 1/19/2005
XD LOVED IT! Another great chapter! And yes, it did make sense. Cant' wait for the next chapter!
fei-yen chapter 6 . 1/19/2005
I've read Destin and Armand's story. So I'm still waiting for the real story for Linc and Allan. _ After reading this, I'd say it's the next chappie.

Hope you'll upd8 soon!
Chinatsu chapter 6 . 1/19/2005
I spot some problems in this chapter. I understand that since Finding Heaven and Blackmail Love happens at the same time, there are bound to be some overlapping scenes. However, these scenes should be told strictly from Allan or Lincoln's point of view. I noticed that you did some copying and pasteing in this chapter. There were several scenes that had Destin and/or Armand's thoughts, feelings, and sensations in it. Example "Destin looked down his hand stung from the slap, and he could still feel tears burn his eyes." Here it is from Destin's point of view, not Lincolns. This chapter had some good points, and you made a good effort in melding the scenes, but it still needs to be fixed up and polished.
ddz008 chapter 6 . 1/18/2005
Interesting chapter!I'm really glad you have updated!I want Lincoln and Allan together but in a loving and caring way, but I know tha many things are going to happen until that happens.I remember that in Finding Heaven, Allan, Lincoln and someone else have a threesome, right? Or am I mistaken? :SWell, please keep writing!:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
Aharah Musici chapter 6 . 1/18/2005
Luv it
Chantrea Johari chapter 6 . 1/18/2005
Good chapter as always. I love how you've built up the tension between Lincoln and Allan and made everything so dramatic. Simply wonderful. It's interesting to contrast Lincoln and Allan's take on the events of the cruise from what I remember from Finding Heaven. Keep up the good work!
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