nice write more soon!

It made sense but it also made me want more. It's cool to see the cruise from Lincoln and Allan's perpsectives.

Congratulations, almost all of it made sense. I had to reread a few parts. But that's just my obsessive compulsive re-reading disorder thing.

Oh yay! I somehow think Linc is getting a big attraction towards Allen. He is so in denial! I can't wait to read more. C ya.

Too sleepy to leave a proper review, so I'll just say it was a great chapter and continue soon.

Well I just started reading this, and I like it :). Update soon! :-P.

*pines* I NEED chapter 6. This story is the love of my life.

You know, the box below tells me to "...use this opportunity to comment on an aspect of the story that can be improved." But uh...there really aren't any aspects I'd WANT to be improved (assuming, of course, that improving this story was possible...It's awesome!) I just love the story and the way it's written. It's crazy and mean and stuff, but easy to relate to.

I feel like Linclon: all confused and stuffs, a lot, so I can really get into the story and how he feels because of his and Allan's relationship. Especially when he gets frustrated about things and wants to cry but won't let himself. That makes it realistic, which is good Not that I needed to tell you. You know you rock my world _-

I love you sweetie. Sorry for not reviewing earlier.

Can't wait for more. LoL. I should make a nice little thing where I'm not allowed to read your updates till I update myself...You know how fast I'd be updating? LoL. I wouldn't be able to take it.

Jinny

Oh i LOVE this!

Allan should be feeling gulity for what hes doing to poor Lincoln! U i wonder what Donovan does..oh the mystery! cant wait for the nect chapter!

*squeals and hugs you* I haven't been on FictionPress for a really long time, and the last time I was here I read your ever wonderful fic, 'Finding Heaven'. At least, I think it was called Finding Heaven. Anywho, I just LOVE this fic with Allan and Lincoln as the main stars! _ I can't wait till you update the story! I'll keep checking back till you do!

I wanna know what happens...*said in a pathetic voice*

Gosh nearly everyone is on this cruise! Ugh Val is back? Throw him overboard!

i love this chapter because they kind of switch positions, now Allan isn't sure and Linc's realising he doesnt want it all to end...*gushes* please update soon!love, [Kai]

XD Aww I feel bad for Lincy-poo. Lol. Great chapter, loved it bunches. You better update soon, I can't wait to see what happens!