Reviews for Blackmail Love
Esquirella chapter 5 . 1/3/2005
Another fantastic chapter. I knew Allan's conscience would catch up to him eventually, especially after the motel incident.
sb1 chapter 5 . 1/2/2005
This story continues to hold my interest and continues to surprise me. Every now and then I stop despising Alan even, although I have to admit, it he were dropped overboard and eaten by sharks I wouldn't grieve too much..but still, he seems to have some grasp of why what he is doing is seriously wrong and some "finer feeling" that he keeps hidden for who knows what reason, I'm sure there is a story there and a reason. I like to imagine that the softer side of him is what confuses and attracts Lincoln, rather than just the sex. (Whether he is conscious of it or not) Like I say, it keeps me reading and waiting impatiently for where these two go next!
J.D. California chapter 5 . 1/2/2005
yumy job more soon pa-leze ]
Chantrea Johari chapter 5 . 1/2/2005
I read the review that prompted the author's note for this story awhile ago, and it honestly aroused this need inside me to defend you. I mean, honestly, who *condones* rape? (except, obviously, rapists, but somehow, I doubt you're in that category). I mean, just because an author writes something doesn't mean they necessarily agree or disagree with what was written. That's why it's called *fiction*. I just started on this whole long rant, but basically, what I wanted to say was: don't change what you planned to write just because a reviewer is unhappy. *You* are the author, and I think your story is brilliant.

On to my actual review then:I really liked Lincoln's sister in this chapter. I thought that what she said, and her reaction, was very honest and believable, and I can certainly understand her desire to protect her brother from (the bastard!) Allan.

What Lincoln said when his neighbor asked him about the blackmail...well, it makes me more and more nervous about what the blackmail material really is. The anticipation's killing me.

I also love how you can see that Lincoln, with time, is getting more and more used to his relationship with Allan. It's a bit endearing, while still being angsty and wonderful and contradictory in all the right ways. It seems plausible, the way he begins to care for Allan more and more, yet he is unable to see or truly understand what he is feeling.

And, of course, I have to say that I absolutely *love* Allan's angsting. I love characters who do the whole silent angst thing; when you know something's wrong, but the person refuses to talk about it, gets someone else all worried, and...yeah. Of course, I hate that in real life, but-fiction. Right.
Ladako chapter 5 . 1/2/2005
Oh! Another great chapter. I can't get enough of these stories! I seriously can't. And I love the fact that your chapters are long but I get said when it's over. I could keep reading this for hours. I can't help it. Your characters and plots are awesome. Don't make everyone wait to long for the next chap please. PLease!
Silver Daratraz chapter 5 . 1/2/2005
bookworm0706 chapter 5 . 1/2/2005
It's great! Please update soon! And now I don't know if I should feel sorry for Lincoln, the Good Guy, or Allan, the Bad Guy *pouts*. Oh, well, well-written stories can do that to you :P.

Mars Demo chapter 5 . 1/2/2005
ah that was a good chapter, and as much as I would like to hold a grudge against Allen, I think the he could be, (if he stopped blackmailing Lincoln) be a good guy, (**smiles evily**) well Update Asap

Much Love Mo D
Chardae chapter 4 . 12/12/2004
yay theyre starting to have a 'normal' relationship! woo! good for them! cant wait for the next chapter!
Nothing More chapter 4 . 12/7/2004
aw its so sweet, XD, update ASAP

Never B
Esquirella chapter 4 . 12/7/2004
Great chapter! It didn't jump around much. I saw it as showing how Allan and Lincoln are evolving in their relationship.
Aharah Musici chapter 4 . 12/6/2004
Ouch this souncd like conflict major int he future
serenade chapter 4 . 12/5/2004
Oh! I loved his reaction to Destin. Does the blackmail thing have to do with someone who is also going to attend the cruise? Update soon!
Kaikeyi chapter 4 . 12/5/2004
wow this chappie kind of ended happily for once! _ can't wait for the cruize though, love [Kai]
K. T. Wood chapter 4 . 12/5/2004
I don't think it jumps around too much- and even if it may i am far too enthralled in the story to care. Lol. Loved the chapter. It's amusing watching (reading)Linc. try and suppress his moans and groans. The cruise will be interesting. :o). It sure was last I really would like to know what the "secret" is. I hate not knowing things. ok, well. Update again soon!
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