Reviews for Blackmail Love
skybluey chapter 4 . 5/15/2006
WOW! Another nice chapter! _
skybluey chapter 3 . 5/15/2006
Poor Lincoln~~
skybluey chapter 2 . 5/15/2006
Ohh! Why is Lincoln doing this when he still feels guilty? :(
skybluey chapter 1 . 5/14/2006
I always like Allan and Lincoln! _ I think this will be a very good story! I will continue to leave a review for the nxt chapter!
Hokit chapter 12 . 4/15/2006
Whew! That was hot!

Poor Allan. That turn-down from Lincoln must've stung badly. Well, at least Lincoln's admitted outright his undying love for him (sounds cliche, I know) and the option of them tying the knot sometime in the future remains open.

The relationship between the two's fascinating. On the one hand, Allan's authoritarian enough to backhand Lincoln when he feels threatened, yet at the end, he finally understands that Lincoln's more than an object of lust - he's a human who has the right to make his own decision about where he wants to be and whether he wants to stay with Allan or not.

Great story, and great effort as well. Congratulations! :)
Prisoner-11 chapter 12 . 4/5/2006
Yay! I like happy endings!
ItalianQT chapter 12 . 3/12/2006
Good story! You're an excellent writer! :-)
Nejis Soulmate chapter 12 . 3/3/2006
So I don't have to say how much I enjoyed this story. I couldn't stop reading until I hit the last chapter. So now I'm just going to be very greedy and ask for a Trenton/Sadiki story pretty please.
Nickel Xenon chapter 12 . 11/2/2005
Very good! I loved this story.
Darwin ruler of all chapter 12 . 10/22/2005
I just wanted to say this; this is one of the most disturbing stories I've ever read. I know that must sound hypocritical, seeing as I have read the whole thing, but I never said it was bad, just disturbing. The way you strung it together meant that while it creeped me out, and I could see the eventual result, I had to keep reading, because I wanted to know how you'd get there.

One or two points - I am surprised Lincoln stayed in the relationship. Love or not, that is one of the most freakishly self demeaning and self destructive relationships I have ever read about. But maybe he's just that hopelessly in love. He's a realistic character, but God I hope I never end up as masochistically stupid as him.

Another thing - do you have a proofreader? Because if so, he/she/it sucks. Not that I'm calling you ilitetate, but there are times when you use the wrong word, like experiment instead of experience. I could always get what was meant, but it was a bit strange. You might want to wait a day after writing a chapter, then proofread it before posting it up.

Gosh, this is a fairly negative reveiw. Well, it wasn't meant to be, you're a good writer. I've read one or two of your things, and I like the way you make your characters so horrifyingly prone to hideous misunderstandings. It's distressing, but really involving in the story.

Well, I hope this is coherent, and not insulting, and possibly vaguely useful. Thanks for an interesting read.
Aharah Musici chapter 12 . 8/20/2005
WAH~ I am soo sad this is over~ the ending was so unexpectdley twisted~ I would love to have a short or one shot about Armand&destin's marrage... _V Specially the wedding night _~
maddie chapter 12 . 8/11/2005
thank you, for this wonderful story

hugs M
Sheepie chapter 12 . 8/11/2005
. Lovely ending sweetie! It was really sweet!
Namishka chapter 12 . 7/25/2005
several places as in where? CRDP?...
Cherise chapter 12 . 7/20/2005
I LOVE this ending, and it was well worth the wait. Lincoln and Allan deserve each other and this ending couldn't have been any better!
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