Another great chapter! Loved it sweetie, very emotional. The sex was hot but kinda sad. Poor Lincy. I'm glad things are getting better for them. And gaspers! I couldn't belive the thing that was used for blackmail... . Ba~ad little Linc. Lol.

Anyways, great job on the chapter, loved it!

Wow what a shocking secret definately worth the wait to find out. And the errors were very minimal good job cant wait for the update

Whoa!I'm dying to read more. You write so passionately, makes me jealous. I hope you continue to write.

hm...interesting...definitely interesting...

hm... i have a request. can i give Allan a punch?no?oh. alright, it's ok.

(sorry, my mind's a bit off these days...~_" Well, great chapter. hope you update soon and hope nothing bad will happen on their Christmas 'date' _)

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Another great chapter! I know he's trying to make up for it but Allan is turning more and more into a bastard! Poor Lincoln, I love him and he's getting so hurt. It's breaking my heart. I hope he ends up okay. Update soon! C ya.

mmhmm allan u better be good to linc! and omg thats some major drama with linc's secret! wow i wasnt expecting that! wow...cant wait until the next update!

yes~ if they hit rock bottom, then that must mean they'll start to patch things up rite?... O.o?... *but still shakes fist at allan* anyhoo~ love the chapter!~ hope you update soon!~

And yet another stupid move from Allan, I must clap for such stupidity! YOU GO ALLAN! Now, let's try doing it the RIGHT WAY! Earning someone's love isn't that hard you idiot! Anyway, very nice chapter.

I was just thinking. Thank you for using capitals. ...sometimes ..using capitals all the time is unnecesary.. stupid english grammatical laws. Um, yes, ignore me. I just hate it when people don't bother to capatalize ANYTHING.

woot! I will love you forever.

Hm, ok, that was cool. My neighbors think I'm nuts, screaming at the computer over here. I'm almost glad there was no one else in the house to hear me. Few choice four letter words directed mainly at Armand for giving Allan that stuff in the first place. I drowned out the sterio -blushes- Me screaming makes it a great scene.. it would seem.

The first two or three paragraphs were confusing, you might want to clarify that both Lincoln and Destin were in the office.

hehehe, the last part made me laugh; the roads closed down thing. I'm don't remember what was so funny from Finding Heaven. Unconcious reaction.

Tell me what you change in Finding Heaven when you do and if you don't want to edit the entire thing I'll do it. -grin- sorry, my favorite subject in school was grammer, I'm a little nit-picky.

Things from earlier: I was thinking this makes a great story on it's own with Finding Heaven to back it up and then I noticed that if it was to be you should clarify things such as who Adam is and not assume we already know everything about Armand and Destin. Not that we don't. -grin- I'm sorry, I've been leaving stupid reviews lately and I'm trying to be constructive. -throws flowers-

I can't be bothered signing in. Awesome chapter. I feel so bad for both of them. I still love Armand and Destin so much! Lol. UPDATE AGAIN REALLY SOON!

I was really anxious to see Lincon's and Allan's POVs of when they got stuck at Armand's and Destin's house. Great conflict here, too. Allan is finally seeing that his dominant streak is what's driving Lincoln away.

ahh, I still think that Allen is a misdirected jerk nonetheless there might be hope for him yet.

Much Love Mars D'mo