Reviews for Boarders
Tr APeze-sWiNGer chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
So romantic and beautiful. Nice use of repetition. I'm sure someone's pointed this out already, but I think you might've meant "too" and used "to" once or twice. Then again, I read it both ways and it sort of makes sense, so maybe it was intentional.
dark88poet chapter 1 . 5/1/2005
emoyional rollercoster
Safety Canary chapter 1 . 4/18/2005
This was wonderful. That's all that needs to be said.
lyingdreamer chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
This is beautiful, for lack of more worthy adjectives.
InFeRnOsKuLL chapter 1 . 11/16/2004
WOW...beautiful!...It speaks so well...I actually teared up...I never do that...I know exactly how you feel...I feel that way everyday...OF COURSE..tho it's the reverse..(meaning substitute "man" for "woman") lol...Awsome job!
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 10/26/2004
That was simply beautiful
I wish i can write something like this! so deep and emotional
great work!
Eleriana chapter 1 . 10/18/2004
I love this poem, it conveys perfectly the complexity and also contradiction of the feelings that people can have for each other. You are a fine poet.
BloodKnives CrookedRainbows chapter 1 . 10/17/2004
this was a very nice poem. i like the imagery and the flow of it. i especially like the beginning, but then after that it got a little confusing for me. i still think that it is good tho.
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 10/15/2004
A haunting piece. m
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/15/2004
to far from myself...too
to deep...too
to fast...too
I liek it.. tis beautifully written.. I lvoe the beginning and the end especially... awesome job