|Reviews for Boarders|
| Tr APeze-sWiNGer chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
So romantic and beautiful. Nice use of repetition. I'm sure someone's pointed this out already, but I think you might've meant "too" and used "to" once or twice. Then again, I read it both ways and it sort of makes sense, so maybe it was intentional.
| dark88poet chapter 1 . 5/1/2005
| Safety Canary chapter 1 . 4/18/2005
This was wonderful. That's all that needs to be said.
| lyingdreamer chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
This is beautiful, for lack of more worthy adjectives.
| InFeRnOsKuLL chapter 1 . 11/16/2004
WOW...beautiful!...It speaks so well...I actually teared up...I never do that...I know exactly how you feel...I feel that way everyday...OF COURSE..tho it's the reverse..(meaning substitute "man" for "woman") lol...Awsome job!
| mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 10/26/2004
That was simply beautiful
I wish i can write something like this! so deep and emotional
| Eleriana chapter 1 . 10/18/2004
I love this poem, it conveys perfectly the complexity and also contradiction of the feelings that people can have for each other. You are a fine poet.
| BloodKnives CrookedRainbows chapter 1 . 10/17/2004
this was a very nice poem. i like the imagery and the flow of it. i especially like the beginning, but then after that it got a little confusing for me. i still think that it is good tho.
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 10/15/2004
A haunting piece. m
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/15/2004
to far from myself...too
I liek it.. tis beautifully written.. I lvoe the beginning and the end especially... awesome job