|Reviews for Pieces|
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
Rainstorm asks the sun,
For a short little respite,-
He just forms more clouds.
| Edraith chapter 1 . 11/6/2004
Sadly beautiful. The image of the pieces is effective, and I can relate to the thought of always having to be sad for some reason and wishing one could be happy just for once. Powerful poem.
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 10/18/2004
i love love love this one!
| lifescrewsusall chapter 1 . 10/16/2004
yeah i think this is my favorite of the one's i've read by you. It flows, gets a point across, and expresses much emotion through thoughtful words and imagery. What else can you ask for in a poem? Keep up the great work
| hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 10/16/2004
that was an awesome read! once again, the emotion is wonderful! i felt like this alot lately, and i think this is one of the best poems i've read on this topic. keep up the great writing!