Reviews for Styrofoam & Snow
kit feral chapter 1 . 3/6/2005
I remember this. I liked it. It's so pretty and sad at the same time and it's just so great. You have true talent. Keep it up!
jez two chapter 1 . 10/18/2004
That must have been quite painful to write. My grandad died a while ago and one of the things you mention there brought back some memories to bite me on the ass. Despite that (or because of?) I really like this.
It's a wonderfully writen poem. I love the line, 'The snow was falling like Styrofoam', and the way it's altered, '...rain Styrofoam like snow', makes it seem that by the end of the poem you're writing it more clearly, almost like you don't need to mix the words because the point's already gotten across?