|Reviews for Sunshine|
| Julie-d112 chapter 1 . 12/19/2005
Nice imagery you have, great Haiku, keep up the good work!
| sloppy firsts chapter 1 . 12/19/2005
wheni read this i get an image of a child staring up towards the sun. powerful imagery here.
| Rocky G chapter 1 . 1/21/2005
I cant believe this is your first haiku, its beautiful excellent work. :)
| David Stephen chapter 1 . 1/1/2005
ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL! I loved this! It was so excellent! The imagery was fantastic - and the words painted a beautiful picture. Wow I am so impressed! DS
| Toph Gonzalez chapter 1 . 10/28/2004
simple yet awesome... there's something in it that makes it feel grand
| Scales of Sapphire chapter 1 . 10/23/2004
is pretty... *tears in eyes* You worrk is really good compared to mine.
| katmonkey chapter 1 . 10/23/2004
Nice imagery and great haiku! :D
| Silence the Storm chapter 1 . 10/17/2004
Short and sweet, clear message and very nice wording. Well done!
| Cinnamon Zo chapter 1 . 10/16/2004
Oohh...pretty. I like it a lot!
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 10/16/2004
Clear and beautiful. m
| Obsidian Eyes chapter 1 . 10/16/2004
Nice one! Good imagery, write on.